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This week's snippet is from the book, the scene where the heroine, Stephanie, meets the hero, Doug. Doug is dressed up as a character for Stephanie's niece's fifth birthday party:
“You are not supposed to be Superman.”
“What?”
Superman went to the van and drew a paper off the seat. “I’m sure, yup-says
right here, Superman.”
Stephanie
took the paper from him and crumbled it. “You are supposed to be Cinderella.”
“No.”
Superman looked at her with a combination of horror and confusion.
“Cinderella?”
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LOL I can imagine his horror. LOL How could such a confusion happen? Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Elyzabeth.His sister (who owns the costume co) sent the wrong character. On purpose. In her words "It was either Superman or you in drag" Doug wasn't happy...
DeleteFun. I'm wondering why she thinks he should be Cinderella.
ReplyDeleteThanks Cara. Stephanie hired Cinderella for her niece's fifth birthday party--a princess party. The company sent the wrong character.
DeleteIt's a laugh out loud snippet! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jess!
DeleteLOL love this snippet! I could just picture his horror when she tells him he's supposed to be Cinderella!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lauren. :)
DeleteCute! I love the set up - this will be a terrific read, I'm positive...Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica.
DeleteI think he's got the wrong party! Funny way to have them meet.
ReplyDeleteI was thrown a bit at first. My last novel has a character named Stephanie whose father is named Doug. LOL
You got the names from characters are us, too?? LOL. He's got the right party. Wrong costume. It happens...
Deletefunny!
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DeleteLOL. Not quite the same, is it?
ReplyDeleteNo, not quite.
DeleteWhat an interesting way to meet! I don't think he'd look too good as Cinderella. :-)
ReplyDeleteI don't think he would either, Debbie. :)
DeleteHe already wears the tights, hihi, this snippet was funny.
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda. You can't resist a man in tights...
DeleteLOL I could just SEE the look on his face when she told him he was supposed to be Cinderella. Very cute snippet.
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