Sunday, October 7, 2012

#SixSentenceSunday: The Whisper of Time; Slate and Gwynn

 My six today are from my new release, The Whisper of Time, a time travel romance novella. Here, Slate and Gwynn are trying to ignore the attraction between them:

Click here for more on The Whisper of Time
Slate and I kept a careful distance. I stepped past my attraction, my growing feelings for him, as though there were raw eggs planted under my feet. I watched him though, stolen glances from the corner of my eye as we milked and watered the animals. It was a revelation, how I loved the way the muscles in his forearms corded under the weight of a grain sack, the way he whistled aimlessly, the way his hair curled over the small shell of his ear. I began believing more and more in destiny and that Slate was mine.
Still, we kept a careful distance

For more great sentences, visit Six Sentence Sunday


  1. Very nicely written. I love the build-up and switch. Excellent Six

  2. This is just gorgeous, Ute. Superb six.

  3. Aww, but why are they both trying to ignore it?

    1. They have their reasons, Pippa. Though I think you no doubt know the reasons won't keep them apart. LOL.

  4. This is soooo fabulous! You've written this beautifully, and now I want to know SO much!