Sunday, February 12, 2012

#SixSentenceSunday Leona on the scene

Hi sixers! I thought it might be fun to share the last six sentences added to my WIP,  a romantic comedy called Searching for Superman.


“Mother, please.” Conrad’s voice had gone up an octave.
“Oh, for heaven’s sake, it’s not even loaded.” Leona squeezed the trigger. The gun went off with a ping as it dented the police car door. A collective “Oh my God,” rose from the crowd. 

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4 comments:

  1. oops! Hate when that happens! This made me chuckle, great 6!

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  2. That's hysterical. What a great snippet. Hope she knows a good body shop!

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