tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post8839911435162649554..comments2023-10-04T06:17:58.476-04:00Comments on Ute Carbone: Weekend Writing Warriors: To the WindAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-56334276773153213192013-03-06T09:43:44.033-05:002013-03-06T09:43:44.033-05:00Thanks Ed. Historical is something new for me. I l...Thanks Ed. Historical is something new for me. I love the challenge!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-83971810616082837752013-03-05T23:55:58.017-05:002013-03-05T23:55:58.017-05:00It's obvious by the dialogue that you're r...It's obvious by the dialogue that you're researched the time period. Great job with using it to enhance the setting!E.D. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06919218250424892502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-69650234059534056292013-03-03T21:35:31.914-05:002013-03-03T21:35:31.914-05:00Thanks Mery. He is a bit stubborn, but he'll c...Thanks Mery. He is a bit stubborn, but he'll come around. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-84450599414001759092013-03-03T20:37:09.386-05:002013-03-03T20:37:09.386-05:00Oh great snippet. I'm wondering why he thinks ...Oh great snippet. I'm wondering why he thinks she'll run his life. She is crying. That's when you are supposed to embrace her and say, "I love you" back. Lol. Can't wait to read more. meryvamphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07233468177700177135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-1036458260235959612013-03-03T16:25:53.323-05:002013-03-03T16:25:53.323-05:00Yeah, go ahead Kate.:) I don't think it will d...Yeah, go ahead Kate.:) I don't think it will do much good though. He's a nineteenth century man with a nineteenth century mentality. I think Lenora might be able to get to him yet, though. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-58982850580907737232013-03-03T15:31:57.726-05:002013-03-03T15:31:57.726-05:00She's not trying to run your life. Men can be...She's not trying to run your life. Men can be so thick-headed at times. Can I throw something at him? Please?Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-27394379181403813222013-03-03T15:02:10.010-05:002013-03-03T15:02:10.010-05:00Thanks Brenda!Thanks Brenda!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-69235808131077284302013-03-03T15:01:45.925-05:002013-03-03T15:01:45.925-05:00Thanks Debbie. Hopefully, I'll have another bi...Thanks Debbie. Hopefully, I'll have another bit written when next Sunday rolls around!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-69317111008053143052013-03-03T15:00:53.299-05:002013-03-03T15:00:53.299-05:00Thanks Veronica. I'm starting to think like 18...Thanks Veronica. I'm starting to think like 1852--I'm not sure this is a good thing, LOL.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-30619941278765118932013-03-03T13:13:39.913-05:002013-03-03T13:13:39.913-05:00Very vivid and I felt I stepped back in time. Very...Very vivid and I felt I stepped back in time. Very well done and I can't wait to see what happens next. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10662330531296268959noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-17407640716461864522013-03-03T12:24:08.565-05:002013-03-03T12:24:08.565-05:00You've certainly captured the feel of the era ...You've certainly captured the feel of the era with your dialogue. Interesting story line as well. Looking forward to the next instalment.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-15210276272189815592013-03-03T12:02:04.535-05:002013-03-03T12:02:04.535-05:00The dialog definitely puts us in the right century...The dialog definitely puts us in the right century and the right frame of mind - excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-78399133440155287662013-03-03T11:21:34.013-05:002013-03-03T11:21:34.013-05:00Thanks Elyzabeth. It's a challenge to get the ...Thanks Elyzabeth. It's a challenge to get the dialog right. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-61307121974677115992013-03-03T11:20:43.504-05:002013-03-03T11:20:43.504-05:00Thanks Maggie!Thanks Maggie!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-31647820876045759752013-03-03T11:20:23.899-05:002013-03-03T11:20:23.899-05:00Thanks Elaine!Thanks Elaine!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-88848465118312484982013-03-03T11:18:59.585-05:002013-03-03T11:18:59.585-05:00Thanks Summer. I'll have another look.Thanks Summer. I'll have another look. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-5550244964275933972013-03-03T11:18:04.340-05:002013-03-03T11:18:04.340-05:00Thanks Cat! Thanks Cat! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-17520200838156956892013-03-03T10:34:02.738-05:002013-03-03T10:34:02.738-05:00Great, well written excerpt. There aren't any ...Great, well written excerpt. There aren't any physical descriptions but by the word choice you do get a feel of the 19th century. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-26582337215013725202013-03-03T10:30:59.558-05:002013-03-03T10:30:59.558-05:00Wow! Very powerful. Thanks for sharing!Wow! Very powerful. Thanks for sharing!Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08965434230302395649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-32244178087268055912013-03-03T09:46:58.609-05:002013-03-03T09:46:58.609-05:00You're doing great with evoking the 19th centu...You're doing great with evoking the 19th century voice.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-35353905848630603992013-03-03T09:08:40.352-05:002013-03-03T09:08:40.352-05:00I love your word choice- great job at a real feel ...I love your word choice- great job at a real feel for the time. I did notice that this one sentence read awkward- "I could not have caught her meaning clear."<br /><br />Have a great Sunday!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-33156653819364714192013-03-03T07:07:11.526-05:002013-03-03T07:07:11.526-05:00Great excerpt, Ute. There's a real sense of ti...Great excerpt, Ute. There's a real sense of time and atmosphere hereCatherine Cavendishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17449903323633317080noreply@blogger.com