tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post7048097781168178046..comments2023-10-04T06:17:58.476-04:00Comments on Ute Carbone: #8Sunday #SundaySnips Slow HandsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-74234045457879087282013-10-14T07:16:20.623-04:002013-10-14T07:16:20.623-04:00I like the contrast between his behaviour with her...I like the contrast between his behaviour with her and the chair and his job as a skier. He has multiple skills. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-31215473994055972942013-10-13T22:56:07.340-04:002013-10-13T22:56:07.340-04:00I like the comparison between the chair and her bo...I like the comparison between the chair and her body, Ute. Good snippet. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-13990479182562672632013-10-13T20:12:37.325-04:002013-10-13T20:12:37.325-04:00Beautiful word choice... Very sweet, and sexy :) Beautiful word choice... Very sweet, and sexy :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02950642717131117241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-53657253470056701572013-10-13T15:45:39.991-04:002013-10-13T15:45:39.991-04:00Oh well done. Wonderful imagery.Oh well done. Wonderful imagery.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-554644607390618622013-10-13T15:34:29.144-04:002013-10-13T15:34:29.144-04:00Lovely imagery and description. Nice 8!Lovely imagery and description. Nice 8!Sarah Casshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03299866797067130767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-8521211203126506182013-10-13T15:24:47.138-04:002013-10-13T15:24:47.138-04:00Excellent excerpt, very visual and I enjoyed the c...Excellent excerpt, very visual and I enjoyed the contrast between how he skies and how he makes a chair. I was a bit puzzled by the different use of tenses but not taken out of the scene at all...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-73718537819628002162013-10-13T15:14:34.848-04:002013-10-13T15:14:34.848-04:00Very evocative eight...love the last 2 lines! Wel...Very evocative eight...love the last 2 lines! Well done, Ute!J. A. Hornbucklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17052929905955160076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-76831180481980739012013-10-13T12:16:48.391-04:002013-10-13T12:16:48.391-04:00It is a little tricky, Willa. She's rememberin...It is a little tricky, Willa. She's remembering the past, but the book is written in present tense (if that makes sense). The changes are something we're looking at in editing. It maybe just this snip, as it's taken out of larger context, but I will have another look at the whole. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-39693151257852120862013-10-13T12:14:10.372-04:002013-10-13T12:14:10.372-04:00Thanks PTThanks PTAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-90695139950799116112013-10-13T12:13:47.003-04:002013-10-13T12:13:47.003-04:00Thanks Jess!Thanks Jess!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-29208496220732481882013-10-13T12:13:20.529-04:002013-10-13T12:13:20.529-04:00Thanks Charmaine. I think you already know what ha...Thanks Charmaine. I think you already know what happens next, :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-65644753046811771872013-10-13T12:07:56.323-04:002013-10-13T12:07:56.323-04:00Lovely imagery, but I will say the verb tense chan...Lovely imagery, but I will say the verb tense changes threw me.Willa Blairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12465306036271972772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-44830886987137713382013-10-13T11:14:21.263-04:002013-10-13T11:14:21.263-04:00Very sensuous. Very sensuous. PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-29557316242384456052013-10-13T10:30:40.979-04:002013-10-13T10:30:40.979-04:00Awesome description!Awesome description!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-51530173874449214292013-10-13T09:12:15.332-04:002013-10-13T09:12:15.332-04:00Beautiful imagery, Ute. What happens next, slow an...Beautiful imagery, Ute. What happens next, slow and soft?Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com