tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post6376699410321561596..comments2023-10-04T06:17:58.476-04:00Comments on Ute Carbone: #8Sunday #SundaySnippets: A world of painAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-25042786799225913902013-08-30T18:38:59.719-04:002013-08-30T18:38:59.719-04:00Yeah, you definitely convey a great sense of dread...Yeah, you definitely convey a great sense of dread and fear. Thanks for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-56081693717105046392013-08-27T03:30:42.811-04:002013-08-27T03:30:42.811-04:00Interesting snippet. Can't wait to see if she ...Interesting snippet. Can't wait to see if she gets to her goal.Lynn Crainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17563978872099232823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-12425044396032864452013-08-26T15:54:59.184-04:002013-08-26T15:54:59.184-04:00Great description. And so close to her goal... Great description. And so close to her goal... PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-17366139576207543802013-08-26T00:37:00.064-04:002013-08-26T00:37:00.064-04:00Oh, that's terrible, she needs to arrive quick...Oh, that's terrible, she needs to arrive quickly. Isn't anyone looking for her? Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-51233674371947075122013-08-25T18:15:51.030-04:002013-08-25T18:15:51.030-04:00Nice analogy with her seeking to shield the baby f...Nice analogy with her seeking to shield the baby from the pain.<br />Great 8!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-71685384409881523042013-08-25T18:01:47.793-04:002013-08-25T18:01:47.793-04:00Oh no! I hope it stops-
~SummerOh no! I hope it stops-<br />~SummerSummer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-16336593934551966752013-08-25T16:37:02.651-04:002013-08-25T16:37:02.651-04:00How terrible to have her child in this setting. I ...How terrible to have her child in this setting. I fear for her child and for her. This isn't safe.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18155827930296685025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-14001245353767324152013-08-25T15:49:49.987-04:002013-08-25T15:49:49.987-04:00Thanks Sarah. I seem to remember that too...pantin...Thanks Sarah. I seem to remember that too...panting, wasn't there a whole lot of panting?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-54409066643342042322013-08-25T14:54:30.579-04:002013-08-25T14:54:30.579-04:00About three sentences in, I started doing some lon...About three sentences in, I started doing some long-forgotten Lamaze breathing . . . <i>very</i> intense scene!Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-64344722777084996452013-08-25T14:25:34.441-04:002013-08-25T14:25:34.441-04:00Thanks Willa!Thanks Willa!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-51467947583974224402013-08-25T14:25:12.535-04:002013-08-25T14:25:12.535-04:00Sadly, it doesn't Sharon.Sadly, it doesn't Sharon. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-19151977001615404892013-08-25T14:24:33.673-04:002013-08-25T14:24:33.673-04:00Thanks Veronica. Thanks Veronica. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-20337113007659552072013-08-25T14:24:08.610-04:002013-08-25T14:24:08.610-04:00Yikes! Thanks Cindy. It's true about skimming-...Yikes! Thanks Cindy. It's true about skimming--luckily it's a WIP and there's still lots of time to fix things.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-12964589989921659232013-08-25T14:22:31.774-04:002013-08-25T14:22:31.774-04:00Yeah, not a good moment for poor Lenora. Thanks fo...Yeah, not a good moment for poor Lenora. Thanks for stopping by Millie.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-39982320389444546162013-08-25T12:53:48.582-04:002013-08-25T12:53:48.582-04:00Intense!Intense!Willa Blairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12465306036271972772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-2270933520647715982013-08-25T12:49:15.741-04:002013-08-25T12:49:15.741-04:00How terrifying! Childbirth is dangerous in any era...How terrifying! Childbirth is dangerous in any era, and this setting does not bode well for her baby!Sharon Buchbinder, Romance Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02848087216042290453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-31132233103519593322013-08-25T12:41:15.632-04:002013-08-25T12:41:15.632-04:00Very tense scene, leaves me hoping everything will...Very tense scene, leaves me hoping everything will be ok somehow. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-65995353677288276342013-08-25T12:33:11.246-04:002013-08-25T12:33:11.246-04:00Oh my, shes going into labor. This could be very b...Oh my, shes going into labor. This could be very bad if she doesn't get somewhere quick! <br /><br />Couple of typos though (in case you want to correct). I think the word "see" is missing from second sentence "I could ___ the Norris house two doors down..."<br /><br />"I bent double as though I shelter my unborn child from these blows." sheltered, yes?<br /><br />My eye skims stuff all the time in my own writing. :)<br /><br />Intense scene though. I'm scared for her!<br /><br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders</a>HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-40808957710939923952013-08-25T10:54:53.056-04:002013-08-25T10:54:53.056-04:00Oh no...I hope she's far enough along...this m...Oh no...I hope she's far enough along...this makes me sad.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.com