tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post1354015164356712894..comments2023-10-04T06:17:58.476-04:00Comments on Ute Carbone: #8Sunday #SundaySnippets: Meifeng's Secret.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-60897709305595838562013-08-24T09:42:13.357-04:002013-08-24T09:42:13.357-04:00I love this "Her voice was even as the tick o...I love this "Her voice was even as the tick of a clock" perfect description of someone reliving a traumatic event and repressing her external emotions, while dying inside.Sharon Buchbinder, Romance Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02848087216042290453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-77074343708853379272013-08-20T19:19:09.714-04:002013-08-20T19:19:09.714-04:00Oh my, so much emotion and hurt in so few words. ...Oh my, so much emotion and hurt in so few words. Nice job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-17310746347638181832013-08-20T16:55:23.848-04:002013-08-20T16:55:23.848-04:00Wow. Intense and intriguing. Definitely makes me w...Wow. Intense and intriguing. Definitely makes me want to keep reading. Nicely done!Alicia Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003539473772776004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-76299132784229338602013-08-20T02:23:20.548-04:002013-08-20T02:23:20.548-04:00Powerful excerpt. Well done.Powerful excerpt. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-89232923661034509882013-08-20T01:47:26.345-04:002013-08-20T01:47:26.345-04:00A very poignant excerpt there.A very poignant excerpt there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-573100229177359402013-08-19T13:42:53.066-04:002013-08-19T13:42:53.066-04:00Excellent snippet! I love the way the emotions ar...Excellent snippet! I love the way the emotions are captured so subtly. PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-35548387717191500382013-08-18T23:56:52.016-04:002013-08-18T23:56:52.016-04:00She must be really fighting internally to be speak...She must be really fighting internally to be speaking in this way.Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-78624290067737290112013-08-18T21:44:10.974-04:002013-08-18T21:44:10.974-04:00I can really feel her pain under the terse descrip...I can really feel her pain under the terse description--and the subtext is excellently captured. <br /><br />That poor woman...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-82420458917955588042013-08-18T18:30:44.472-04:002013-08-18T18:30:44.472-04:00Exciting snippet. Edward wont take that lying down...Exciting snippet. Edward wont take that lying down, I can feel his anger as he turns away from her, well hidden of course. Great 8. gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-71717726373998599162013-08-18T18:22:13.988-04:002013-08-18T18:22:13.988-04:00Quite a revelation for him to deal with, not to me...Quite a revelation for him to deal with, not to mention awful for her to live through and go on. An intense snippet today. Well done!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-72306408730353352862013-08-18T17:05:50.856-04:002013-08-18T17:05:50.856-04:00
Thanks, Summer. :)<br />Thanks, Summer. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-46212636804702925952013-08-18T17:05:23.676-04:002013-08-18T17:05:23.676-04:00Yeah, badly. But he's a good guy, so he'll...Yeah, badly. But he's a good guy, so he'll come around.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-43324573764276934152013-08-18T17:04:45.193-04:002013-08-18T17:04:45.193-04:00Thanks you, Rayne. She's disclosing something ...<br />Thanks you, Rayne. She's disclosing something she'd rather not think about, so she tells it flat--I imagine it's easier that way.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-77107829237498651852013-08-18T16:02:32.893-04:002013-08-18T16:02:32.893-04:00Sounds interesting.
My BlogSounds interesting.<br /><a href="http://summersvoice.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">My Blog</a> Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-66239898546283585352013-08-18T14:53:17.903-04:002013-08-18T14:53:17.903-04:00I can't tell how he's going to take this--...I can't tell how he's going to take this---'badly' is a given, but I hope he doesn't blame her . . . Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-84078942862421869282013-08-18T14:41:15.162-04:002013-08-18T14:41:15.162-04:00"His voice was even as the tick of a clock&qu..."His voice was even as the tick of a clock" shows me how lacking in emotion the voice is. Great snippet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18155827930296685025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-58782712249282347432013-08-18T14:34:59.922-04:002013-08-18T14:34:59.922-04:00Thanks Sharon. I think they'll work it out, bu...Thanks Sharon. I think they'll work it out, but...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-42199596503498323852013-08-18T13:07:27.499-04:002013-08-18T13:07:27.499-04:00Oh no, very tense, a great excerpt. It makes me wa...Oh no, very tense, a great excerpt. It makes me want to know more. This is a character with much to overcome.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15985850107712167044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-5149541912129206172013-08-18T11:33:54.864-04:002013-08-18T11:33:54.864-04:00Thanks, Cindy! Thanks, Cindy! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-50577200175715071752013-08-18T10:45:05.138-04:002013-08-18T10:45:05.138-04:00You played that scene very well. She tells him wit...You played that scene very well. She tells him without saying the exact words. I like that her sentences are short, like she said it quick just to get it out. And his response is perfect, I think. Trying to absorb it. Great 8!<br /><br />(No snippet for me this week. :)HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-73181752271390905042013-08-18T10:38:58.034-04:002013-08-18T10:38:58.034-04:00Thanks Elaine. :)Thanks Elaine. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434800650947342139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8794231887463255020.post-23764628966376389462013-08-18T09:42:57.630-04:002013-08-18T09:42:57.630-04:00This sounds like a super read. Congrats on the up...This sounds like a super read. Congrats on the upcoming release.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.com